Wednesday, January 5, 2011

Mothman Introduction

MothmanSKETCH OF MOTHMAN

Melvick wandered down a dark small ally. He had just finished an important assiment from his work in South Dakota. While he walked through the ally, he heard hushed whispers. Then he heard quiet laughs from behind him. He spun around clutching his paperwork. Nothing was there. Then something moved to his right, he turned fast, but still nothing. Then from the roof of a building a shadow jumped down. And other shadows crawled in from around him. The shadows were soon surrounding him. he held up his work in defence. "Leave me alone!" He shouted to the shadows. The one in front of him hissed a laugh, the others followed with laughs of their own. When his eyes got used to the darkness he saw a strange figure in the shadows, but the thing he most noticed was their red gleaming eyes. The eyes followed his every move. The tension built, then out of fustration Melvick screamed for help. At that moment the shadows pounced, they were all over him knocking him down hard to the wet ground. The shadows were quick, they teared his head apart from his body with out letting him even scream in pain. Then they sucked the blood from his body, pround of themselves. After they drank they left the body there to cause people in the city to panick. They loved when people fussed and panicked over them. They left to go to the otherside of town to cause mayhem over the country. But little did they know, that on the otherside of town was a magical girl who was trained to kill them, just like the rest of her classmates at, Belikov high. But this girl was the only one who was magic.
        

2 comments:

  1. Thanks for posting on my blog! Okay, here's your comment. I can tell your a Skulduggery Pleasant fan, LOL. So am I. I'm almost done reading Mortal Coil. The shadows here sound kind of like Remnants but with bodies that can do things (like eat.) It's very good. I didn't see many grammar mess-ups so that's very good as well. :) The story's scary too which means you have a category, horror. Creepy indeed. Can't wait to meet this magic girl at Belikov High. Best of luck writing.
    ~Anya

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  2. It sounds really spooky :)
    very creepy

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